whisper-scream?

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alpacinou

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I want to say a person was angry in a situation. They wanted to speak but at the same time kept their voice down.

Can I say whisper-scream?

Her wife opened the door and walked in. "The children are asleep, honey," he said.

"What the hell is your boss doing in our house," she whisper-screamed.
 

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I don't like it. I think you can come up with a better way of expressing that.
 

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I think you've mixed up some of your gender references, if he's talking to his own wife.
Her wife opened the door and walked in. "The children are asleep, honey," he said.

"What the hell is your boss doing in our house," she whisper-screamed.

Regarding the question at hand - I can't think of a term at the moment, although whisper-scream, whisper-shout, and whisper-yell all do come up on sites like Urban Dictionary, but that doesn't mean they're widely used or established.

There's also a stage whisper, although that isn't a perfect fit for this context. Perhaps just an 'angry whisper' or an 'aggressive' whisper'?
 
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