are this paragraph correct
my name is noman, i work in a textile factory since last 10 years,
i joined the company in 1999 as a Assitant to Export Manager, after two years of my satisfacory performance company promoted me as a Export Manager. i want to explore my expertise in some other manufacture concern. i am also good in ms office and internet browisng, emails etc.
Re: Is this paragraph correct?
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noman12 
My name is Noman and I have been working in a textile factory since for the last 10 years.
I joined the company in 1999 as an Assistant to the Export Manager. After two years of my satisfactory performance, the company promoted me as a to Export Manager. I want to explore widen my expertise in some other manufacture concern. a different area of manufacturing.
I am also have good in msMicrosoft Office, and internet browisng and email skills. etc.
See above. You need to ensure that you always use "I" when speaking about yourself, not "i".
