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Hi everybody.Now,I hope anyone to help me proofread the paragraph below.The topic" Benefits of study abroad":

If you are being disturbed and hesitant about studying abroad, you will have no regrets because of the benefits it will bring you. First, studying abroad is the best way for you to add learn a foreign language. {No better and more efficient way is that you enjoy yourself in a country, a culture that you're learning their language.} This sentence has to be rewritten - I cannot understand what you mean.
You will be surrounded by the language on in a background that was is wonderful. Your language cannot not help but grow quickly in a situation that is so favorable. Besides, you will have the opportunity to travel in the holiday weekends and enjoy the extra-curricular activities. You will discover endless new things about a country that you may not have had the opportunity to travel to if your finances does not permit such travel. Here is a good option for those who prefer to explore. Furthermore, you will have very many friends from all five continents. Then of course, you have many new friends not only in your native country but also from all over, they go there as you study (They go there to study also?). This will help you live more friendly and open. Finally, studying abroad will help you change your habits of learning and research. You will be acquainted with a new systems of research and you will have the opportunity to reach learn (?) new ways. It is a good opportunity for you to change the monotonous and tedious routine that you have to learn (endure ?) throughout the course. In short, what why else do you hesitate to plan to study abroad for yourself?

Can anyone help you? Thanks a lot!
Gil