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Which is better, #1 or #2 ?
(1) It's my duty to be ready to help other people.
(2) It's my duty to help other people who are in need.
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I think the second is better. because in the first sentence, it is likely to be: Being ready to help others is my duty.
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Originally Posted by
contiluo
Which is better, #1 or #2 ?
(1) It's my duty to be ready to help other people.
(2) It's my duty to help other people who are in need.
They are both fine.
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I am also confused by the following sentences, is it acceptable?
An instant later, the poor old beggar transformed into a wealthy man with a crown and a bag of jewels.
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Originally Posted by
contiluo
I am also confused by the following sentences, is it acceptable?
An instant later, the poor old beggar transformed into a wealthy man with a crown and a bag of jewels.
Yes, it is fine. I am guessing the previous sentence was something like, "The man wished to be rich."
"An instant later" means he became rich very quickly after wishing - instantly.
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Originally Posted by
contiluo
Which is better, #1 or #2 ?
(1) It's my duty to be ready to help other people.
(2) It's my duty to help other people who are in need.
(not a teacher)
Both are okay to me.
But I prefer (2) to (1):
It's my duty(obligation) to help other people in need.
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If you say 'other people who are in need' it does sound as if you too are in need.
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