which sentence is grammatical or better?
Which of the following sentences is grammatical or better?
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From 1999 to 2002, when he was studying in xxx Schoo, I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.
From 1999 to 2002, he was studying in xxx Schoo, and I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.
Re: which sentence is grammatical or better?
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Originally Posted by
runbabyrun 
Which of the following sentences is grammatical or better?
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From 1999 to 2002, when he was studying in xxx Schoo, I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.
From 1999 to 2002, he was studying in xxx Schoo, and I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.
********** NOT A TEACHER **********
Runbabyrun,
I most respectfully suggest a few changes in both sentences:
When he was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, I
was his math teacher and class tutor.
He was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, and
I was his math teacher and class tutor.
I personally prefer the first sentence that I have suggested.
********** NOT A TEACHER **********
Re: which sentence is grammatical or better?
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Originally Posted by
TheParser ********** NOT A TEACHER **********
Runbabyrun,
I most respectfully suggest a few changes in both sentences:
When he was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, I
was his math teacher and class tutor.
He was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, and
I was his math teacher and class tutor.
I personally prefer the first sentence that I have suggested.
********** NOT A TEACHER **********
Thank you very much!
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