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please correct my email
Please help to write the following email. Thanks
As we discussed earlier today that I would like to take couple hours vacation time in the afternoon of Jan. 03. I would like to leave 12:00 PM at my lunch time. I will return as soon as done with the appointment.
Last edited by jkl; 22-Nov-2010 at 17:35.
Re: please correct my email
Basically, the easiest way to correct this is to rewrite it. Please don't feel that it is bad. I have tried to keep to the original where possible.
Originally Posted by jkl
As discussed earlier today, I would like to take two hours vacation on January 3rd. I would like to leave at noon at the beginning of my lunch break. I will return as soon as my appointment is over.
I hope this helps.
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