How to write a letter to a school for asking about their scholarships?

**devonpham1998** · 27-Nov-2010, 09:52

I want to study abroad in England and I will write a letter to a school asking about their scholarships. But I don't know how to write a letter in a formal way.

Please give me some recommendation!

**Rover_KE** · 27-Nov-2010, 15:15

Here;s a template for a formal letter:

http://www.schoolhistory.co.uk/gener...rmalletter.pdf

Now have a go at writing the content of your letter and we will comment on it.

Rove

**devonpham1998** · 29-Nov-2010, 22:02

Thank you for your guide. Here is my letter's form, please take a look and leave me some comments:
Dear Madam/Sir,
My name is Devon Pham and I am ....years old and will be ... this December. I am a Vietnamese student and I study in Hanoi-Amsterdam school.
I love and want to study abroad in England. My teacher recommended that ... is the best high school for me. I have visited your school's website and everything of the school impressed me so much. I would like to know if your school has some scholarships for foreigners.
Thank you very much for spending time to read this letter! I hope that you will reply me as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
Devon Pham

**Rover_KE** · 30-Nov-2010, 08:29

Originally Posted by devonpham1998

Here are some suggestions for a rewrite:

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Devon Pham. I am ....years old and will be ... this December. I am a Vietnamese student studying at Hanoi-Amsterdam school.

I love England and want to study there. My teacher recommended that ... would be the best high school for me. I have visited your school's website and everything about the school impressed me very much.

I would like to know if your school has any scholarships available for foreigners.

Thank you very much for spending time reading this letter. I hope that you will reply as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Devon Pham

Rover

**devonpham1998** · 30-Nov-2010, 09:22

Originally Posted by Rover_KE

Rover

Thank you very much, Mr.Rover! I really appreciate all the help you gave me.

Devon

**devonpham1998** · 30-Nov-2010, 10:57

Should I write "at Hanoi-Amsterdam school" or "in Hanoi-Amsterdam school", Mr.Rover?

**Rover_KE** · 30-Nov-2010, 13:41

At is better.

Rover

**devonpham1998** · 05-Dec-2010, 11:07

Hello, teachers and friends who are reading my thread.
I am going to write a letter to an England school. Please take a look at my letter's form and leave me comments:
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Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Devon Pham. I am ... years old and will be ... this December. I am a Vietnamese student studying at Hanoi-Amsterdam school.
I love England and want to study there. I found a homestay in East Sussex and the host family will be my guardians in England. ... is a school also located in East Sussex. I have visited your school's website and everything about the school impressed me much.
I would like to know if you would give me admission to study in your school the next year.
Your faithfully,
Devon Pham

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Thank you!

**devonpham1998** · 05-Dec-2010, 11:11

Hello again, Mr.Rover. I decided to write a letter to a school in England but not ask for the scholarships. So what the letter is for, please read through my letter's form and leave me comments:

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Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Devon Pham. I am ... years old and will be ... this December. I am a Vietnamese student studying at Hanoi-Amsterdam school.
I love England and want to study there. I found a homestay in East Sussex and the host family will be my guardians in England. ... is a school also located in East Sussex. I have visited your school's website and everything about the school impressed me much.
I would like to know if you would give me admission to study in your school the next year.
Your faithfully,
Devon Pham
---

Thank you!

**devonpham1998** · 05-Dec-2010, 12:42

Hello, teachers and friends who are reading my thread.
I am going to write a letter to an England school. Please take a look at my letter's form and leave me comments:
---

Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Devon Pham. I am ... years old and will be ... this December. I am a Vietnamese student studying at Hanoi-Amsterdam school.
I love England and want to study there. I found a homestay in East Sussex and the host family will be my guardians in England. ... is a school also located in East Sussex. I have visited your school's website and everything about the school impressed me much.
I would like to know if you would give me admission to study in your school the next year.
Your faithfully,
Devon Pham

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Thank you!

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