Please somebody check my English and give your valuable suggestion to improve it much better.
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Last edited by sweetmannu; 25-Apr-2011 at 13:26.
Please somebody check my English and give your valuable suggestion to improve it much better.
Sorry, there's just too much there for me! However, I have scanned it and can say it's generally good, so just send it in and I'm sure it will serve you well.