Does the expression in bold mean that the fans need too much energy to operate?
"The problem with the fans is twofold: first, they are heavily energy intensive, and, second, they are prone to breaking down."
It means they use a lot of electricity. I wouldn't say "too much" based only on the phrase in bold, but coupled with the idea that it's a problem and you can infer that it's too much
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Thank you.