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Check my text please, thanks
Per Peter, we noticed you agreed pay the round trip air freight to ship 100 pcs of D10 new front panel to the customer for replacement. It is required arrive in next Monday in USA. Please advise the cargo ready date and send us packing list today. 100 pcs incorrect panel will be returned to you soon.
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Re: Check my text please, thanks
We noticed that you have agreed to pay the round trip air freight to ship 100 pcs of D 10 new front panels. It should be shipped to the customer for replacement. It should reach USA by next Monday. Please let us know when the cargo will be ready and also send the packing list to us. We will return the 100 pcs of incorrect panels to you soon.
I am not a teacher, hope this is ok.
Last edited by varmaswathy81; 14-Apr-2011 at 05:18.
Reason: as per the correction suggested by billmcd
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Re: Check my text please, thanks
Hi Zoe
"Peter has confirmed that you have agreed to pay the round trip air freight for the replacement of 100 pcs of D10 new front panels. The replacements must arrive in USA by next Monday.
Please advise the new proposed "cargo ready for shipment" date and send us packing list today.
The 100 pcs of incorrect panels will be returned to you as soon as possible."
Hope this helps
R21
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Re: Check my text please, thanks

Originally Posted by
varmaswathy81
We noticed that you have agreed to pay the round trip air freight to ship 100 pcs of D 10 new front panels. It should be shipped to the customer for replacement. It should reach USA by next Monday. [STRIKE]Please tell the cargo to be ready by the date [/STRIKE]("Please advise the cargo ready date" is correct in the original post. It means to tell us when the cargo will be ready) and also send the packing list to us. We will return the 100 pcs of incorrect panels to you soon.
I am not a teacher, hope this is ok.
See note above.
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Re: Check my text please, thanks

Originally Posted by
billmcd
See note above.
Thank you sir, I have done corrections. hope it is ok now.
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