a) "A performance dominant over team B...."
b) "A dominant performance over team B...."
c) "A performance over team B...."
a) and b) sound okay to me, but not c). Does it mean that "dominant" goes together with "over", in the same way that "superior" and "comparable" (to name a few examples) go together with "to", such that the following are standard English:
"A defense superior to team B's ...."
"A superior defense to team B's ...."
"A defense comparable to team B's ...."
"A comparable defense to team B's ...."
Last edited by JosephBerk; 16-Sep-2011 at 03:05.
"be hard on" = "be mean to". So the following are correct too?
"A manager hard on his subordinates....."
"A hard manager on his subordinates......"
"A performance dominant over team B will send Team A to the final." (1)
"A dominant performance over team B will send Team A to the final."
"A defense superior to team B's defense will carry Team A to victory." (2)
"A superior defense to team B's defense will carry Team A to victory."
"Comments similar to yesterday's comments will not be allowed." (3)
"Similar comments to yesterday's comments will not be allowed."
"He wants a salary comparable to his colleagues' salaries." (4)
"He wants a comparable salary to his colleagues' salaries."
"A manager hard on his subordinates is an employer to avoid." (5)
"A hard manager on his subordinates is an employer to avoid."
Every pair above is okay except the last, pair (5), where the second sentence is objected to by Raymott. Hmmmm.....
Last edited by JosephBerk; 16-Sep-2011 at 13:44. Reason: correction
The "[noun] [adjective] [preposition]" format doesn't not always have an equivalent "[adjective] [noun] [preposition]" format?
Now that you've written complete sentences, I'll comment again.
You've only written "performance" once in the first pair; and you only need "defense", "comments" etc. once in the others, as well.
Yes, there are all acceptable (more or less) except for the second sentence of the last pair. But they are not equally good.
I don't like 1b much. In 2, 3, 4, they are both OK, but the first version sounds better.
5b is wrong. Do you think this sentence is analogous to the others?
How is "hard on" different from "dominant over", "superior to", "comparable to", or "similar to", such that "hard" cannont precede a noun but "dominant", "superior", "comparable", and "similar" could?