The elf Arya accompanied Saphira. Her long black hair billowed wildly around her angular face as she sprang off the pile of rubble. Lines of splattered blood striped her arms and neck; gore smeared the blade of her sword. She alit with a soft scuff of leather against stone.
(C. Paolini; Inheritance)
Does the part in bold mean that a soft scuff was that of her shoes made from leather?
Thanks.
It means there was the gentle sound of soft leather brushing against stone. Her shoes were of leather.
'She alit' - ye gods, who writes this stuff?
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If one is writing about gory elves, it's fine.
I agree that a bit of archaic language used as local colour is not inappropriate in this sort of context. But that particular irregular past of a word that is already archaic struck me as an excessive level of arch obcurity. And I wouldn't recommend it as reading for an English language student - who will spend more time getting misleading (current) meanings in a dictionary than enjoying the story.
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Yea verily would I not.
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