Please tell me, are these sentences right or wrong? HELP ME !

[hantu]

Please help me, are these following sentences acceptable? If they are not, please describe why. Thanks in advance :)

1. She gave him it.

2. She made it her.

3. Before dinner are good time to read.

4. We elected Deva our new treasurer.

[5jj]

1. She gave him it. Possible. She gave it to him is more natural, in my opinion

2. She made it for her.

3. Before dinner are is a good time to read.

4. We elected Deva our new treasurer. Fine.

[hantu]

Thank you so much for the reply !

One more confusion ,

2. She made it for her.

For the second question, can you explain a little bit about it?
What if I change the the sentence to this:
She made it hers.
Is it still acceptable?

[5jj]

'She made it for her'. One female made/constructed/knitted/cooked/etc one thing for another female; she did this to save the other person some work, or to give it to the other person.

'She made it hers'. One female acted in such a way that somrthing became recognisably hers.

[hantu]

THANKS A LOT ! GOD BLESS YOU !