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    Default Re: Please correct my letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Then add "They are the only authorized dealer and we already have a maintenance contract with them". You posted almost the correct sentences yourself.

    Thank you very much for your prompt replies.

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    Default Re: Please correct my letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by tedtmc View Post
    Request for the Purchase of 'Sony' Networking Switch

    The networking switch used in xxx Branch is malfunctioning and needs to be replaced.

    We wish to recommend that the item be purchased from GRP, which are one of our regular IT suppliers and are the sole distributor for SONY products. We attach here a quotation from GRP for the item for your information. We look forward to your approval.

    item to be purchased to item be purchased?

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    Default Re: Please correct my letter.

    You recommend that something (no 'to') be purchased - is correct.

    or

    You recommend something to be purchased.
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    Default Re: Please correct my letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by tedtmc View Post
    You have to get the item from them if they are the sole distributor, not just an authorized dealer. There could be other authorized dealers, in which case, price would be the deciding factor.

    Having a maintenance contract with them is not a good reason to buy from them, is it?

    Only this company sell such switch non of them sell here in KWT.. you are correct having maintenance contract with them isn't a good reason

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