Re: 'such a' versus 'such'
"Such" on its own for uncountable nouns (loyalty), "such a" for countable nouns (start). General rule!
I should point out that it only works for the context you quoted. It is, of course, perfectly acceptable to say things like "Such people are the problem with the world today" even though "people" are countable.
Re: 'such a' versus 'such'
General rule (2) "Such" on its own for uncountable nouns (loyalty) and plural countable nouns (people) , "such a/an" for singular countable nouns (start).
Re: 'such a' versus 'such'
I found both replies very instructive. Thank you.