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  1. 16-Feb-2012, 16:51 #1
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    Default Please make my sentence sound better

    Hi,

    "It is not worth to come all the way for half day, Just the travelling will take half a day. "


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    Default Re: Please make my sentence sound better

    "It is not worth to come coming all the way for half a day,; Jjust the travelling will take half a day. "[/QUOTE] Instead of 'just the travelling, you could say 'the travelling/ journey alone'.
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