Please make it terser

[NewHope]

For the treatment of patients with respiratory disease, especially for the treatment of patients with gastrointestinal tract intolerance, drug X is expected to be an important substitute for drug Y.

[Raymott]

For the treatment of patients with respiratory disease, especially for the treatment of patients with gastrointestinal tract intolerance, drug X is expected to be an important substitute for drug Y.

"For respiratory disease, especially in GI intolerance, X is likely to be superior to Y."

[NewHope]

Thanks