Your sentence is correct.
Rover
Hello, I was wondering if this sentence is correct . I'm going to take a bath while reading a novel. I know that we use the present simple after conjunctions while and when in future tenses but is it possible to just use a present participle ? Thank you very much in advance.
Your sentence is correct.
Rover
I agree that it's correct, but it does not sound very natural to me.
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I think it's because the bath starts, then the reading begins, then you put the book down, and then you finish your bath. So "read while I am taking a bath" sounds okay (to me).
To say "take a bath while reading" makes it sound like you have your nose in your book as you turn on the taps, get undressed, and so on.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.
Yes, I agree entirely. The use of "while" is generally used by giving the activity which will take the shorter time first, and then stating a longer activity that you will be doing before, during and after the shorter one.
I'm going to read a book while having a bath.
He's going to eat his dinner while watching a film.
My brother always writes a short poem while he's eating his breakfast.
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Thank you all very much for your replies. I understand the use of "while" a lot better now. Thanks again for the clarifications.
Last edited by 5jj; 12-Nov-2012 at 18:37.
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May I point out that, IMO, books and water should not get that close to one another?
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