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- 13-Nov-2012, 11:03 #1
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As - so Is this a natural sentence?
As he works hard so he gets first position each time.
- 13-Nov-2012, 11:04 #2
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- 13-Nov-2012, 11:06 #3
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Re: As - so No, and I'm not even sure what you're trying to say. Can you try to explain it differently?
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.
- 13-Nov-2012, 11:24 #4
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Re: As - so Alex works hard as a result he wins first position every time in the class.
Originally Posted by emsr2d2 
Now
As Alex works hard so he wins first position every time in the class.Last edited by Jadoon 84; 13-Nov-2012 at 11:29.
- 13-Nov-2012, 15:40 #5
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Re: As - so For that meaning, you need to remove "so" and it's fine construction-wise. The wording could do with tweaking. Originally Posted by Jadoon 84
As Alex works hard, he wins first position in the class. (Your wording.)
As Alex works, hard, he's always top of the class. (My re-wording.)Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.
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