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  1. 18-Nov-2012, 15:48 #1
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    Default Please refine this sentence

    While others were saying it, we were building it.
    40 years of trust.
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    Default Re: Please refine this sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    While others were saying it, we were building it.
    40 years of trust.
    You have posted two sentences. Well, you have posted one full sentence and a fragment, which I assume is some kind of motto or slogan.
    When you say "refine", what are you looking for?
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    Default Re: Please refine this sentence

    I just want to know if there is any other better way to write the same sentences keeping the essence of the meaning same

    thanks
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    Default Re: Please refine this sentence

    They are fine as they are for advertising or promotion.
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