Re: Is this sentence correct?
There are probably dozens of ways to say this.
Originally Posted by Over the top
When the sun shines on the ocean, water evaporates.
Water evaporates when it is warmed by the sun.
The sun causes water to evaporate.
The sun causes the water in our oceans to evaporate.
The heat of the sun makes ocean water evaporate.
The heat of the sun evaporates the water in the oceans.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 31-Dec-2012 at 19:39.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.