Re: The moment my eyes crossed over....
Originally Posted by emsr2d2
Sorry, I must've passed over it.
It sounds good. But it doesn't quite fit with what I've written.
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Originally Posted by Rover_KE
Would 'the moment our gaze met ' sound better? To mean they both looked into each others eyes?
Basically, the section is full of cliche lovey-dovey moments. It's making it very difficult to convey the scene in the right light...
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