is the following contexet correct?

[john3_10]

place of birth alahsa city hufuf 1976 Gregorian

bachelor in sience and education 1420 hijri

master in curriculums and ways of teaching from king saud university in riyadh 2009 Gregorian

i worked for the secondary vocational institute in alahsa 2005

i worked as a drawing teacher for the general management for girls's education 2006 Gregorian

education inspector for the subject of drawing in the ministry of education 2007 Gregorian

several courses in each of Al-ahsa,Qatif,Qammam,Syria

founder member in the saudi society of visual arts (ssva)

member in the society of visual arts in Qatif

member in bahrain society for visual arts

president of feminist committee in the society of culture and arts in alahsa



local participations (with the kingdom of saudi arabia)

many participations in most of the local exhibitions that are related to general presidency of youth welfare (GPYW), society of culture and arts,ministry of culture and many other exhibitions which are weather private or collective in each of the following cities (alahsa,riyadh,dammam,qatif,jeddah and abha,since 1418 hijri

participation in charitable exhibitions the full earning of boards

personal exhibitions

the personal exhibition (gleaming of colors) was held in riyadh bank hall branch of king faisal university branch of wonen in 9/14/2000 Gregorian the society of culture and arts invited this exhibition in alahsa city 28/1/1422 hijri

[csheywood]

Originally Posted by john3_10

place of birth alahsa city hufuf 1976 Gregorian

bachelor in sience and education 1420 hijri

master in curriculums and ways of teaching from king saud university in riyadh 2009 Gregorian

i worked for the secondary vocational institute in alahsa 2005

i worked as a drawing teacher for the general management for girls's education 2006 Gregorian

education inspector for the subject of drawing in the ministry of education 2007 Gregorian

several courses in each of Al-ahsa,Qatif,Qammam,Syria

founder member in the saudi society of visual arts (ssva)

member in the society of visual arts in Qatif

member in bahrain society for visual arts

president of feminist committee in the society of culture and arts in alahsa



local participations (with the kingdom of saudi arabia)

many participations in most of the local exhibitions that are related to general presidency of youth welfare (GPYW), society of culture and arts,ministry of culture and many other exhibitions which are weather whether (BUT use 'both' ie both private and collective) private or collective in each of the following cities (alahsa,riyadh,dammam,qatif,jeddah and abha,since 1418 hijri

participation in charitable exhibitions the full earning of boards

personal exhibitions

the personal exhibition (gleaming of colors) was held in riyadh bank hall branch of king faisal university branch of wonen in 9/14/2000 Gregorian the society of culture and arts invited this exhibition in alahsa city 28/1/1422 hijri

Hello
Even though this is not the final place you want to sent this to, it is still helpful if you can capitalise words. If not, teachers may assume you don't know this at all and teach the basics.
1. All place names, eg Riyadh, Saudia Arabia and organisations, abbreviated names and their initials (SA, HIJRL,) are capitalised in English. Headings require capitals eg Personal exhibitions.
2. I also suggest a few more separate headings for different sections. It's not too easy to follow the information eg. 'Education', 'Employment history' etc.
3. The order of employment can be in chronological or most recent first.
4. Since you include both dating systems I think it's a good idea to indicate Gregorian calendar, not just Gregorian, and indicate what 'hijri' means at the beginning of the curriculum vitae CV(?)

I hope this is helpful.