Help with a sentence

[dean]

Can somebody please comments the English?

"Upon completing data collection for the final study in December 2008,my master study has been progressing well".

Regards,

Dean

[Mr.Tuan]

Can somebody please comments the English?

"Upon completing data collection for the final study in December 2008,my master study has been progressing well".

Regards,

Dean

Hi Dean,

I can find some mistakes in your sentence. They are in blue and underline words (phrase) below. The correct sentence is:

Upon completing data collection for the last course in Dec. 2008, I have progressed very much.

Regards,
Mr.Tuan