[Grammar] Hello! I need some grammar check

[csheywood]

Originally Posted by halfknot

I don't have problems with the pressure so I don't go to contests for gaining experience anymore. Yes, I had tried the English Olimpiade

I asked since they are a good way to get some experience in exams.

Originally Posted by halfknot

after that, I've given up I gave up - because you said 'after that' ie. after you had tried the Olimpiade because there were some Olimpiades where I thought that I would be doing better would have done better . (I'm sure I have several mistakes in this short paragraph)

Actually not so many

[halfknot]

Thanks for correcting me. I think there aren't a few.

I came back with another short paragraph (I'm not sure if it's too early, but anyhow, I'm not asking for an immediate check.) :

Looking into his eyes was giving me a rise of uncertainty. His persistent fixedly look was asking for something I can't fully understand even now, when I can analyse things more clearly. I would have smiled discomforted with anyone else in this kind of situation but his severe expression was not allowing this to happen so I felt the need to say something:
"You can't subtract my self-confidence like this, your eyes betrey you", I said with the most categorical tone that I could gather in that overpressured situation. But unfortunately it wasn't enough.

[halfknot]

Why doesn't anyone answer here?

[trung dung]

hello evryone!!I come from Viet Nam. I like English but I feel speak English very difficult.I want to learn Einglish, I hope evreyone can hepl me. Thank you so much