[Grammar] One sentence

[larpa]

Hello,

I could use some proof-reading with this sentence:

"Work experience is very important for Finnish students and what I have learned from work,is that usability is still more or less overlooked"

The part in bold is something I'm not quite sure about.. I feel that it should be smoother somehow.

Thanks in advance

[sarat_106]

Originally Posted by larpa

Hello,

I could use some proof-reading with this sentence:

"Work experience is very important for Finnish students and what little/mostly/clearly I have learned from work,is that usability is still more or less overlooked"

The part in bold is something I'm not quite sure about.. I feel that it should be smoother somehow.

Thanks in advance

Use an adverb as suggested. Perhaps it sounds better

[larpa]

Thanks for the tips.

Hmm, could it be something like "and from work I have learned.." or "and via work.."? Or are those incorrect? I am trying to say something like that work experience has taught me that usability is still etc. but I don't want to repeat the term 'work experience'

[bhaisahab]

Originally Posted by larpa

Hello,

I could use some proof-reading with this sentence:

"Work experience is very important for Finnish students and what I have learned from work,is that usability is still more or less overlooked"

The part in bold is something I'm not quite sure about.. I feel that it should be smoother somehow.

Thanks in advance

"Work experience is very important for Finnish students and I have learned, from my experience of working, that usability is still more or less overlooked"

I think perhaps the above is an improvement, though the original is ok.