Could someone please comment on "Hands" passage?

[Ever Student]

"Hands"

Hands are useful and yours. They could be changed into many different things all time. they get sometimes a means for giving something to somebody, for example, a loaf of bread to a poor, hungry, old neighbor or a book filled with colorful pictures to an illiterate crying child in order to calm him down, or a gift for Mother's day after a year to remind you of her assistance during your life. They could write something like an apology letter to a friend who has been angry with you for a long time. They may also draw a picture of the sea and mountains covered by green trees and blue sky and hang it on the wall in hospital for patients suffering from blood cancer to look at it and forget their pain just for a while. What's more, hands play the role of both givers and receivers. They may be stretched for you and want money in the corner of the street or knocking at the door as someone else is behind it. Who is that? It is I, a poor man! Somewhere you find one of your relatives seeking a financial help and shows their empty hands to you. Here you consider you and someone else's hands two of the best gifts that God gave you with his hands.

[Ever Student]

would you please edit my pasage?

[Raymott]

Originally Posted by taghavi

"Hands"

Hands are useful [and yours]. They could be changed into many different things at different times. They get are sometimes a means for giving something to somebody, for example, a loaf of bread to a poor, hungry, old neighbor or a book filled with colorful pictures to an illiterate crying child in order to calm him down, or a gift for Mother's day after a year to remind you of her assistance during your life.
They could write something like an apology letter to a friend who has been angry with you for a long time. They may also draw a picture of the sea and mountains covered by green trees and blue sky and hang it on the wall in hospital for patients suffering from blood cancer to look at it and forget their pain just for a while. What's more, hands play the role of both givers and receivers. They may be [stretched for you] and want money in the corner of the street or knocking at the door as someone else is behind it. Who is that? It is I, a poor man! Somewhere you find one of your relatives seeking a financial help and they show their empty hands to you. Here you consider your hands and someone else's hands two of the best [ gifts that God gave you with his hands.]

"Hands are useful and yours" doesn't mean anything. Do you mean "Your hands are useful"?
[stretched for you] Do you mean someone might tug at your hands in the street, wanting money?
[God gave you with his hands.] I would write " organs that evolved for man during his formation" But it's not my paragraph.

[Ever Student]

Originally Posted by Raymott

"Hands are useful and yours" doesn't mean anything. Do you mean "Your hands are useful"?
[stretched for you] Do you mean someone might tug at your hands in the street, wanting money?
[God gave you with his hands.] I would write " organs that evolved for man during his formation" But it's not my paragraph.

Hello,
Thanks for your reading.
-No, I mean hands are useful and they belong to you.
- What does a poor man do with his hands while he is begging or asking you to give him money?
-You mean that God dosen't gave these hands as gifts by his help?
Thank you,

[Raymott]

Originally Posted by taghavi

Hello,
Thanks for your reading.
-No, I mean hands are useful and they belong to you.
Then, "Hands are useful, and they are yours."

- What does a poor man do with his hands while he is begging or asking you to give him money?
They could stretch toward you.

-You mean that God dosen't gave these hands as gifts by his help?
No. Being agnostic, I don't subscribe to any Gods, so I would attribute hands to evolution. But, as I said, it's your paragraph, not mine.
Do you think I'm evil now?
Thank you,

R.

[Ever Student]

Don't you believe in God? If your answer is no, can I ask you why? I would like to hear more of your idea.

[Raymott]

Originally Posted by taghavi

Don't you believe in God? If your answer is no, can I ask you why? I would like to hear more of your idea.

No, I don't. Why? Not believing in things for which there is no evidence is the default position. All gods are man-made.
Some things they teach you when you are a child turn out to be true and some don't.
If there is something like a "God", I don't bother her and she doesn't bother me. I think we both prefer it that way.

You should read the "Do you believe in rebirth" thread if you want to know what I think.

[Ever Student]

Ok I will read it.
Thanks

[Ever Student]

Originally Posted by Raymott

No, I don't. Why? Not believing in things for which there is no evidence is the default position. All gods are man-made.
Some things they teach you when you are a child turn out to be true and some don't.
If there is something like a "God", I don't bother her and she doesn't bother me. I think we both prefer it that way.

You should read the "Do you believe in rebirth" thread if you want to know what I think.

I read it.
Thanks