Please, help me with proofreading my essay! I really need this grade!

[desperate_student]

I've been working on this for three days straight and somehow I totally skipped over the fact that I'm horrible at using grammar. My teacher is really adamant about using commas and good grammar so could you help me please. I would so appreciate it. I just need you to to proofread it for me.


[ Already got help ]

[desperate_student]

you can even just single out what needs to be corrected if you don't have the patience for the whole thing.

[Ann1977]

you can even just single out what needs to be corrected if you don't have the patience for the whole thing.

I'll help you.

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Best wishes,
~ Ann