Re: help me please
Here are some corrections of mechanical (grammar, spelling, punctuation) errors:
One or two comments:
Originally Posted by Asayel
You say that some people are in favor of wind power for these reasons:
1) safe for the environment;
2) no greenhouse gas emissions;
3) no radioactive waste;
To me, reasons 2 and 3 are a subset of reason 1. They are examples of reason 1, not separate points.
When you are writing a persuasive essay, you do want to acknowledge opposing viewpoints, but keep them out of your conclusion. The conclusion is where you make your strongest argument, so don't remind the reader of other points of view there.
I hope this is helpful,
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