Can you please help me with my essay please make changes and try to better my introduction
The Harappa Civilization is one of the oldest and most complex civilizations of the world.
It consists of well flourished cities dating back to 2500BCE. However, the civilization did not
always have sophisticated structures in their cities. They actually have remnants dating back to 6500BCE. Meaning that the Harappa civilizations were not a complex society originally, but made changes in their system to achieve their complexity. Archaeological evidence from recent history of
the Indus Valley, the Harappa civilization show signs of evolving from settlements into becoming
Urbanized. The signs include early culture, artistic styles, technologies and social organization
that each culture differed from the other. Trading between these cultures, induces social and
cultural changes, causing towns to become more urbanized and later on forming cities.
Re: Harappa civilization
The blue parts are mine and the red parts should be removed from the sentences. I just left them there for the purpose of comparison. So while reading don’t pay attention to them.
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