[Grammar] Compare and Contrast Essay! Please profeed it??

[Cathy0922]

Ok, here is the essay prompt.

Kate's illness takes a toll on both Sara and Brian. However, each of them
copes with it in a different way.

Compare and contrast the two parents on the following or any other issues: their reactions to Kate's initial diagnosis and prognosis, ways and means of escape, interaction with others(family members, friends, colleagues), reaction to Anna's lawsuit.

Please check for any grammar or punctuation errors. Tell me what you think of the essay overall and what I need to work on.

Its due Thursday, so please send me the essay with corrections by tomorrow.

Thanks!!