plz correct my essay about the train( missing the train)

[germany7amada]

hello everybody that can help me our teacher in college asked as to write an essay about the train that we reached but the train was leaving.
i will start with>>>>>
I reached the station just as the train was leaving.i started waiting another train to go to cologne city.i opened my bag and I ate some hamburgers and started listening to music.after 30 minutes i looked to my hand watch it was 3 oclock and the next train didnt arrived yet.i looked to the plan to the next train and i found it will come in 4 oclock.i waited in the station till 4 oclock because there was no near market to the station. at 4 oclock i looked but there was no train i looked to the schedule and i saw that today was sunday."there wont be another one till tomorrow morning" said the porter.
thanks for everybody that can help me with my wishes

[greenisgood]

hello everybody that can help me our teacher in college asked as to write an essay about the train that we reached but the train was leaving.
i will start with>>>>>
I reached the station just as the train was leaving.i started waiting another train to go to cologne city.i opened my bag and I ate some hamburgers and started listening to music.after 30 minutes i looked to my hand watch it was 3 oclock and the next train didnt arrived yet.i looked to the plan to the next train and i found it will come in 4 oclock.i waited in the station till 4 oclock because there was no near market to the station. at 4 oclock i looked but there was no train i looked to the schedule and i saw that today was sunday."there wont be another one till tomorrow morning" said the porter.
thanks for everybody that can help me with my wishes

NOTE: I am not an expert. But here are my edits.


I reached the station just when the train was leaving. I had to wait for the next train going to Cologne city. I started to eat the hamburgers I was carrying in my bag while listening to music. After 30 minutes I looked at my wrist watch and it was 3 PM, and the next train had not arrived yet. I looked up the train schedule for the next train, and found it would not arrive until 4 PM. I had to continue my wait sitting at the station as there was no market near by to visit. Then, it was 4 PM, and the train still had not yet arrived. I looked at the train schedule again, and realized that today is a Sunday. "There won't be another one till tomorrow morning" said the porter.

[germany7amada]

thx alot you are real good friend