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WOMEN IN COMBAT? (argumentative essay)
I'd be very grateful if someone could proofread the below essay on whether women should or should not be allowed to enter combat.
many thanks in advance
Women in combat: should women be fighting in the front line?
Women and war have always been considered to have little in common. As the gentle sex, women are traditionally associated with caring and with creating life rather than with its destroying. And even though women today do have the opportunity to enter the army, they are not officially allowed to enter combat and fight alongside their male counterparts. Indeed, who would put a gun into the hands of such a tender and vulnerable being as a woman?
Certainly, there are a number of arguments in favour of women being excluded from front line fighting. The first, and probably the most obvious, argument is that, for the most part, they lack the body strength that is necessary to perform in combat. Because of this, they would have difficulties in handling the extremely heavy military equipment used on the field; the manipulation with a gun would take them longer, which would create an opportunity for the enemy to shoot first. Also, they would have problems when a need arises to carry the body of a wounded comrade off the battlefield.
The second argument is that women do not possess the necessary mental strength and therefore they would not be able to cope with the mental and emotional stress involved. Women are generally considered to be very gentle, caring and compassionate. Because of these personality traits, they would have problems handling the atmosphere of fear and hostility that is inevitably generated on the battlefield. Thus, in the light of these arguments, it may seem to be a logical conclusion that women should not be allowed to fight in the front line.
However, it is crucial to note that the above arguments are based on the traditional image of a woman and are general statements rather than ultimate facts; in other words, they may not be true for every woman. While most women lack the necessary physical strength, some may be strong enough to perform in combat situations and they may even be able to meet the male fitness requirements.
Likewise, it may be argued that the ability to cope with stress is a characteristic that varies between individuals, regardless of gender. In addition, it is important to realize that being in combat is an extremely difficult time for every human being, whether it is a man or a woman. Therefore, it would not be correct to generally exclude women from front line fighting on account of characteristics that, in reality, are possessed by both men and women, though to a different extent.
Considering all the arguments, it can be seen that women should be allowed to enter combat; it would be wrong to keep them from combat situations because of the traditional image they are associated with. Rather, they should be judged on the basis of their abilities and personal characteristics.
Re: WOMEN IN COMBAT? (argumentative essay)
Originally Posted by Dipsik
* You could point to the very high rate of Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder (or battle fatigue, or shell-shock) among male veterans to exemplify this.
Another reason that you haven't mentioned is that it is women who get pregnant. If 90% of the male population is wiped out, this is not as bad for the species as if 90% of the females are. This is the rationale for "Women and children first".
This is an excellent essay. One small criticism. In this type of essay, you should introduce your argument in the introductory paragraph. The reader should not have to wait until the end to learn what you believe about the topic. You could fix this easily by adding a short sentence such as "I believe that women should be given a chance at this role".
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