PLEASE CORRECT MY TOPIC!!!!!!!

[anzelkaaa]

In Lithuania is the 9 major banks. But SEB Bank is the largest and most famous, and Swedbank is in second place. There enough banks in Lithuania, because here are live only 3 million people. SEB bank is located near my house and I am using the services of this bank for several years. But other my family members are using other banks for example my mum using Snoras bank's services. Her employer is also used by the bank thereby in a way so it is easier to remit a salary to his mother's bank account. Also my mum used a time deposit services. Time deposit is a safe and simple way of saving money because you get extra money after some time. Thus, I think that everyone should keep one's savings in a bank.
I was in a bank a week ago. I wanted to pay for phone and the Internet services. The queue was very big so I was standing in a queue about 20 minutes. But I was served by a very enjoyable woman.She greeted, chatted pleasantly with me and valed. She was very pleasantly and helpful. Although I was took a long time but I was satisfaction with the bank’s services.
In conclusion, I want to tell that banks are facilitated our everyday life, you can pay for a variety of services in a few minutes, can keep one’s savings and use other services.

[Gillnetter]

In Lithuania is are the 9 major banks. But SEB Bank is the largest and most famous, and Swedbank is in second place. There are enough banks in Lithuania, because here are live only 3 million people live here. SEB bank is located near my house and I am using have been using the services of this bank for several years. But others of my family members are using use other banks. f For example, my mum mother using uses Snoras bank's services. Her employer is also used uses by the bank thereby in a way so it is easier to remit a my mother's salary to his my mother's bank account. Also my mum mother used uses a their time deposit services. Time deposit is a safe and simple way of saving money because you get extra money after some time. Thus, I think that everyone should keep one's savings in a bank.
I was in a bank a week ago. I wanted to pay for my phone and the Internet services. The queue was very big so I was standing in a queue for about 20 minutes. But I was served by a very enjoyable woman. She greeted me, chatted pleasantly with me and valed {What does "valed mean?}. She was very pleasantly and helpful. Although I was took there a long time but I was satisfaction satisifed with the bank’s services.
In conclusion, I want to tell that banks are facilitated our everyday life, you can pay for a variety of services in a few minutes, can keep one’s savings and use other services.

Here are some changes for your consideration. You need to work on tenses in English; past, present, and future. Research the various tenses of to be for starters.

Good luck

[anzelkaaa]

THANK YOU!!!!!!!

[anzelkaaa]

THANK YOU!!!!