Please check that

[nike80]

Hi
Could soneone check that for me? I wrote few sentence and I don't know it's ok or not. I've just started my english advenure.

The aim of this report is to acquaint with business area. The report consists of 4 parts. In the first part I will present forms of the business in Ireland. In the next part I will explain the duties and functions of personnel working in chosen departments in company. The third part of the project will concern the development of the technology and its influence on the work. In the last part I will describe 3 chosen legal documents.

Thanks

[Gillnetter]

Hi
Could soneone check that for me? I wrote few sentence and I don't know it's ok or not. I've just started my english English advenure.

The aim of this report is to acquaint {you? someone? managers?} with the business area. The report consists of 4 four parts. In the first part, I will present forms {Unsure of what forms means here} of the business in Ireland. In the next part, I will explain the duties and functions of personnel working in the chosen departments in of the company. The third part of the project will concern the development of the technology and its' influence on the work. In the last part I will describe 3three chosen legal documents.

Thanks

If you are going to describe three legal documents, it is assumed that they were chosen - there is no need to say it again.

As a rule, it is better to spell out numbers less than 10, rather than writing them as numbers. For example, eight - not 8; seven, not 7.

I suggest that you research countable and uncountable nouns. There are many good resources on the Internet.