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[excitekps]

Dear Sir,
I am planning to bring my wife here to Dubai for one month during her forthcoming annual vacation. (April 15th to May 15th 2010)

I humbly request your good office to arrange One month visit visa for my wife or issue me a non objection letter so that I can obtain a one month visit visa for her from the ministry. All expenses for this visa will be borne by me.

I hope you will favorably consider my request. Thanking you.

[Gillnetter]

Dear Sir,
I am planning to bring my wife here to Dubai for one month during her forthcoming annual vacation. (April 15th to May 15th, 2010)

I humbly request your good office to arrange for a one month visit visa for my wife or to issue me a non-objection letter so that I can obtain a one month visit visa for her from the ministry. All expenses for this visa will be borne by me.

I hope you will favorably consider my request. Thanking Thank (Best regards - Regards - Sincerely - Sincerely yours) you.

I made some stylistic changes. The ending can be, "Thank you" or one of the other options.