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Please check my essay's grammar!!! I need this quick!!! "My Vision of the future"
I've finished my essay, but I haven't checked it for grammar mistakes yet. I'm checking it right now, but can you guys help me as well? The topic is interesting, so I think you'll enjoy the essay while you're correcting it. :D
I've talked about what I think our world will be like 50 years from now. First I've started with an introduction paragraph. Then I've talked about the following topics in 5 paragraphs: Government, Entertainment, Lifestyle, Music and Food. At the end I've finished my essay with an ending paragraph. I really appriciate your help, so please help me quickly! :) Also compare my vision of future with yours if you like.
Here it is:
Originally Posted by Aryan
Re: Please check my essay's grammar!!! I need this quick!!! "My Vision of the future"
nice topic for your essay
Originally Posted by AryanK
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