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Dear Madam / Sir,

We saw in your advertisemet in the magazine "Foreign Trade News" of
the 6th March that you manufacture and export skin-diving equipments like
aqualungs, diving masks and flippers.

Please send us detailed descriptions and illustrations of your manufactured
articles with declarations of your export prices.

If you don't represent in Germany yet, we will ask you whether you probably be
prepare to assign us the monopoly of this area. We have good connections in
our trade and could intensive work on this market.

Bavarian Volksbank in Munich always give you information of our liquidations.

Sincerly yours,
Daniela Rodner


Thanks in advance for your corrections.

Kind regards,
Dany

Last edited by Dany; 21-Apr-2005 at 12:48.
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