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How might Prosebusters Communications serve a company/organization for which you might work ?
Prosebusters Communications is an editorial team whom cuts down the bloated and unnecessary jargon in documents. Their goal is to revise and recreate unreadable dialect to simple and readable bits of information. In a graphical development based company I hope to work for, the workload for Prosebusters Communications may be minimal.
The list of clients associated with Prosebusters Communications range from the Canadian Tourism Commission to the House of Commons, but lack graphical developmental and almost any computer information based clients. The great entrepreneurs of graphical development, Nvidea and Ati technologies, use basic computer jargon to display specifics about their products. That being said, if Prosebusters Communications was not familiar with computer jargon, the outcome would fall far from idealistic. Although higher corporate positions may need to moderate their documents and charts before presenting them in front of potential clients, the graphical developers would surely not receive notable benefits working with Prosebusters Communications. In the world of graphical development, written words are not of much importance as symbols and discrete mathematics.
Given the type of service Prosebusters Communication provides, companies which produce software for graphical processing chips and graphic interfaces, revising long written documents will not bring upon great prosperity.
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