[Essay] A Good Teacher!!

[pechratana]

A Good Teacher

Now, I am a year-2 student in IFL. Sometimes, I ask myself that what I will be in the next two years? What might be doing this time in the next two years? I reckon I will definitely be teaching in one class this time next year since I covet to be an English teacher after graduating. To me, a good teacher is a person who is well-educated, well-behaved, and well-dressed.
To start with, a good teacher must be a well-educated person. Only well-educated teacher can foster his or her students the concrete knowledge. Moreover, with great knowledge about what he or she is teaching, He or she knows ways to flexibly approach the lesson, properly and clearly explain, and handle well to students’ questions. In other words, that particular teacher manages to provide a great lesson plan for his lesson, to interpret his lesson in detail and easy to understand, and to clear any doubt from students.
Secondly, a good teacher must be well-behaved person. In class, teacher is students’ model. In some students’ mind, teacher is their hero and they wish to be just like their teacher when they grow up. Therefore, to be a good teacher, that particular person must be respectful, honest, hard-working, patient, and punctual. With these positive personalities, teacher is an excellent model for students to follow. As a result, a student from his or her class will be became a good child, good friend, and good citizen when they grow up.
Last but not least, a good teacher has to be well-dressed person. Imagine you are learning with a female teacher wearing short skirt, see-through shirt, 3-color hair, and make-up face. Do you think you are attracted by her or her lesson? Or, you are sitting in front of an unruly hair, not-fresh face, sleepy eyes, badly dress male teacher. Do you think how much time you can spend with him before leaving the room? 5 minutes? 10 minutes?
To sum up, a good teacher must be a 3-well person.

[Gillnetter]

Originally Posted by pechratana

A Good Teacher

Now, I am a year-2 student in IFL (First, spell out what IFL is and then put IFL like this (IFL)). Sometimes, I ask myself that what I will be doing in the next two years? What might I be doing this time in the next two years? I reckon I will definitely be teaching in one class this time next year since I covet to be an English teacher after graduating. To me, a good teacher is a person who is well-educated, well-behaved, and well-dressed.
(Do you think that Gandhi was a well behaved and well dressed person?)
To start with, a good teacher must be a well-educated person. Only a well-educated teacher can foster teach his or her students the concrete knowledge. Moreover, with great knowledge about what he or she is teaching, he or she knows ways to flexibly approach the lesson, properly and clearly explain, and handle well to the students’ questions. In other words, that particular teacher manages to provide a great lesson plan for his lesson, to interpret his lesson in detail and in easy to understand language, and to clear any doubts from students.

Secondly, a good teacher must be well-behaved person (The American civil rights leader, Martin Luther King, was considered to be a great teacher yet he was jailed often. How do you defend your opinion knowing that Mr. King was not well behaved?). In class, a teacher is the students’ model. In some students’ mind, the teacher is their hero and they wish to be just like their teacher when they grow up. Therefore, to be a good teacher, that particular person must be respectful, honest, hard-working, patient, and punctual. With these positive personalitiy traits, a teacher is an excellent model for students to folllow. As a result, a student from his or her class will be became become a good child, good friend, and good citizen when they grow up. (One can't become a good child when they grow up. A person is an adult when they grow up.)

Last but not least, a good teacher has to be well-dressed person. Imagine you are learning with from a female teacher wearing a short skirt, a see-through shirt, 3- with three color hair, and make-up on her face. Do you think you are attracted by her or her lesson (I suppose this would depend on whether you are a man or a woman)? Or, you are sitting in front of an unruly hair, not-fresh face, sleepy eyes, badly dressed male teacher. Do you think how much time you can spend with him before leaving the room?, 5 minutes? ,10 minutes?
To sum up, a good teacher must be a 3-well person(This doesn't make any sense.).

I suggest that you review how articles are used in English. In addition, you may want to reconsider your position on what makes a good teacher.