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[sandy1116]

Trends And Fads
What is trendy or fashionable for me? I think Mayday is the most popular band in Taiwan. There are five men in the band. They are loved by a lot of people. Every time their activities or concerts are crowded with many fans. Why is Mayday so popular in Taiwan? I think the reason is that their lyrics can bring us courage and most of people are touched by their songs. When I have a bad mood or face difficulties, their songs always encourage me. No matter whether you are young or old, Mayday lets you feel full of power and courage. I think if you have never heard about Mayday in Taiwan, you are old-fashioned!

[Gillnetter]

Trends And Fads
What is trendy or fashionable for me? I think Mayday is the most popular band in Taiwan. There are five men in the band. They are loved by a lot of people. Every time Their activities or concerts are always crowded with many fans. Why is Mayday so popular in Taiwan? I think the reason is that their lyrics can bring us courage and most of people are touched by their songs. When I have a bad mood or face difficulties, their songs always encourage me. No matter whether you are young or old, Mayday lets you feel full of power and courage. I think if you have never heard about Mayday in Taiwan, you are old-fashioned!

How does being old fashioned equate with not hearing about Mayday? This text would read better if you dropped the questions and dropped the "I think" parts.