Please check this short paragraph!^^

[rosma]

My friend's birthday is coming so i want to send him a message in English.
Thank you very much for spending time reading, checking and fixing it for me!
Thank you!

Hello oppa! How are you? I know your answer! But please this time don’t say you are fine, ok? Just be science, please!

25 years is slowly going by. That means 300 months, 1.330 weeks, 9.313 days, 223.512 hours, 13.410.720 minutes and 804.643.200 have passed away.

You standing there, working hard, laughing brightly, crying when you can’t control your feeling but you are you and that why we - all of your fans, your family, your best friends – always love you and always by your side. Turning around and you’ll see.

And I still try to keep following as much as I can. I’m so scared that I can’t keep up you but I won’t give up!!

Believe in us, ok!^^

[rosma]

Please! Somebody help me! Thank you so mcuh!^^

[Gillnetter]

My friend's birthday is coming so i want to send him a message in English.
Thank you very much for spending time reading, checking and fixing it for me!
Thank you!

Hello Oppa! How are you? I know your answer! But please, this time don’t say you are fine, ok? Just be science (sincere?), please!

25 years is has slowly going gone by. That means 300 months, 1.330 weeks, 9.313 days, 223.512 hours, 13.410.720 minutes and 804.643.200 have passed away.

You standing there, working hard, laughing brightly, crying when you can’t control your feeling but you are you and that why we - all of your fans, your family, your best friends – always love you and are always by your side. Turning Turn around and you’ll see.

And I still try to keep following you as much as I can. I’m so scared that I can’t keep up with you but I won’t give up!!

Believe in us, ok!^^

[rosma]

Thank you ! Thank you very much!