Short Essay about New York

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Hello Teacher,

My essay about New York :

New York is a very attractive city of America. First, the Statue of Liberty is modern marvel and national monument that symbolizes independence, friendship and democracy. The national monument allows people to study America’s independent history and provided a spectacular view of the harbor. Second, New York’s Museum of Modern Art is one of the most influential museums of modern art in the world. It attracts visitors with the display of both modern and contemporary arts that enable them to explore evolution of arts and culture diversity. Third, New York’s Central Park which were both public urban park and “green lung of New York city”. People that visit the Central Park able to enjoy a lot of recreation activities and natural scene at the park. The mentioned landmarks make New York City unique.


I am trying to learn how to write an essay and hoping teacher from around the world able to show me the way on how to improve my essay writing.


Thank you.

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Hello Teacher,

My essay about New York :

New York is a very attractive city of in America. First, the Statue of Liberty is a modern marvel and national monument that symbolizes independence, friendship and democracy (The Statue of Liberty was given to the United States by France in 1886. It is not a modern marvel.). The This national monument allows people to study America’s independent history and provided provides a spectacular view of the harbor. Second, New York’s Museum of Modern Art is one of the most influential museums of modern art in the world. It attracts visitors with the displays of both modern and contemporary arts that enable them to explore the evolution of arts and culture diversity. Third, New York’s Central Park which were is both a public urban park and the “green lung of New York city”. People that visit the Central Park able to enjoy a lot of recreation recreational activities and natural scenes at the park. The mentioned landmarks make New York City unique.


I am trying to learn how to write an essay and hoping teacher from around the world able to show me the way on how to improve my essay writing.


Thank you.

You have the start of a nice essay here. You should learn more about how to use articles.