Short essay about bunny

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Hello Teacher,

Here is a shot essay about rabbit :

Holland Lop rabbits are adorable pet. First, Holland Lop rabbit ear is long and floppy that makes them look uniquely cute. Second, their small and woolly body gives them the advantage to attract people who would like to pet them. Third, they are naturally tame in characteristic enable people from all ages to be their companion. Lastly, we should adopt a lovely Holland Lop rabbit.

Hope to hear comment from you.

Thank you.

[Gillnetter]

Hello Teacher,

Here is a shot essay about rabbit :

Holland Lop rabbits are adorable pet (1). First, Holland Lop rabbits ear is (are) long and floppy, that makes them look uniquely cute. Second, their small and woolly body gives them the advantage to attract of attracting people who would like to pet them. Third, they are naturally tame in characteristic, enable enabling people from of all ages to be their companion. Lastly, we should adopt a lovely Holland Lop rabbit.
1- Rabbits are plural - there are many rabbits. Since rabbits are plural, "pet" has to be changed to "pets".


Hope to hear comment from you.

Thank you.

Gil