could sb correct my letter?

[carolillo]

Dear Carlos,

I have some bad news! I'm in the hospital, my arms are broken and I have my body plenty of bruises and eight stitches on my head... but let me tell you what happened.

As usual, I was driving to work when, suddenly my car broke down. I stopped in a traffic light and the engine stopped too. I was giving my car insurance a call when other car crashed into me.
Because the crashing, my car crashed into a streetlight, I hit my head on the floor and I knocked out.
Previously to the crash, I was got off the car to see what was wrong with the engine and I never wore the seatbelt again.
A man called an ambulance but I was still unconscious when it arrived. I was rushed to hospital where I am. In spite of the injuries, I only have to be here for two days more for blood tests.
I'm looking forward to go at home.
That's all for now. Write soon, please.
Kisses,

[playful]

I have some bad news! I'm in the hospital, my arms are broken and I have my body plenty of bruises and eight stitches on my head... but let me tell you what happened.

I have bad news to tell you. I'm in the hospital with broken arms, eight stitches on my head and many bruises. Let me tell you what happened.

[playful]

As usual, I was driving to work when, suddenly my car broke down. I stopped in a traffic light and the engine stopped too. I was giving my car insurance a call when other car crashed into me.

I was driving to work as usual when my car suddenly broke down. I stopped at a traffic light. The engine stopped. I was calling my insurance company when another car crashed into mine.

[playful]

Previously to the crash, I was got off the car to see what was wrong with the engine and I never wore the seatbelt again.

Before the crash, I had gone out of the car to see what was wrong with the engine, and I had not put the seatbelt on again.

[Gillnetter]

Dear Carlos,

I have some bad news! I'm in the hospital, my arms are broken and I have my body plenty of bruises and eight stitches on my head... but let me tell you what happened.

As usual, I was driving to work when suddenly my car broke down. I stopped in at a traffic light and the engine stopped too. I was giving my car insurance a call when another car crashed into me.

Because of the crashing, my car crashed into a streetlight, I hit my head on the floor and I was knocked out.
Previously to the crash, I was got out off the car to see what was wrong with the engine and I never wore the seatbelt again.

A man called an ambulance but I was still unconscious when it arrived. I was rushed to the hospital where I am. In spite of the injuries, I only have to be here for two days more for blood tests.
I'm looking forward to go at home.
That's all for now. Write soon, please.
Kisses,

Sounds like a really bad day.

[carolillo]

Before the crash, I had gone out of the car to see what was wrong with the engine, and I had not put the seatbelt on again.

I thought that seatbelt goes with wear. That's correct?

[carolillo]

thks, thks, thks