please check this paragraph

[yellow river]

I am trying to write an email

It is wonderful to be connected with many of you. I remember those wonderful days working in the cleaning department at the hotel. It was an amazing experience for me. When I was hungry I would visit the kitchen and I would always receive "something" from my wonderful colleagues working in the kitchen. The fond memories will always remain in my life.

thank you.

[billmcd]

Using "connected" do you mean by email? If not, maybe "to have known you" would be better. Otherwise, it is an excellent email.

[Gillnetter]

I am trying to write an email

It is wonderful to be connected with many of you. I remember those wonderful days working in the cleaning department at the hotel. It was an amazing experience for me. When I was hungry I would visit the kitchen and I would always receive "something" from my wonderful colleagues working in the kitchen. The fond memories will always remain in my life.

thank you.

I would point out that the "many of you" in the first sentence is somewhat of a problem. This means that I like some of the people but not all of them. It is like saying that out of 100 people you like being connected to 95 of them - I guess that you don't like being connected to the other five. I suggest a simple change from "many" to "all".

[RonBee]

When I was hungry I would visit the kitchen and I would always receive "something" from my wonderful colleagues working in the kitchen.

I suggest removing the quote marks from something.