Can you correct these sentences,

[yasser000]

1- New Zealand is not such a wonderful society to live in for a new immigrant insofar as it is hard to fit in with people.

2-Asian societies treat their elderly better insofar as their children genuinely take care of them.

3- Women make better mangers than men insofar as their organizational skills are better than men.

4-My father was not a perfect father insofar as, although he takes me to the entertainment park every Sunday, he does not spend more time with us.

5- NZ is wonderful place to live in insofar as, although it is categorised as an expensive country, it has astonishing nuture.

6- I think Asian people are more determined to get employment than Westren people insofar as, if they have an opportunity of employment, they will achieve success in the given field.

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7- Some communist countries control their citizens to the extent that people are unable to give their opinions in the field of policy.

8- Many people today are afraid of losing their jobs to the extent that they obey their mangers even they are wrong.

9- Overpopulation in the major cities of contries is causing overcrowding to the extent that people need at lesst two hours to go to work.

10- The young men and woment in Westrn countries are very independent of their parents to the extent that, if they reach the age of 20, they go to flatting.

11-The pollution problems of the world are becoming very serious in most mjor cities to the extent that, if nothing is done, people will die of lurg disearse.

12- Many of the southern hemisphere countries are experiencing much drier weather to the extent that it does nt rain for consective months.


Thinks

[tedtmc]

The word 'insofar a' is wrongly used in 1 - 6.
It means 'to the limit'.
They way you have used the word in the contexts makes it seem to mean 'so much so that' which is not correct.

[yasser000]

Thinks bro

So how can I use it.

Any one can correct them please?

[William125]

good !!

[yasser000]

Guys I am really need a one who can help me with this