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    Default Children's talk

    Hi All,

    I just write a funny thing ahppend today between me and my son. Please let me know if I can put it in a better way

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    whenever my children get hurt I blow air/wind from my mouth to thier little injury and they feel happy. Today I got hurt and asked the same thing from my six year old son. He replied, " Mama please come near to the FAN. You are big so you need more air"
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    I am confused for words like wind, air, injury...what could be the better replacement..

    Thanks in advanced
    Gauri

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    Default Re: Children's talk

    Quote Originally Posted by gauri_agr View Post
    Hi All,

    I just write a funny thing ahppend today between me and my son. Please let me know if I can put it in a better way

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    whenever my children get hurt I blow air/wind from my mouth to thier on their little injury and they feel happy. Today I got hurt and asked the same thing from my six year old son. He replied, " Mama please come near to the FAN. You are big so you need more air"
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    It's understood that you blow air from your mouth. When writing of children's injuries you might use "hurts" or "ouchees" - strictly informal but they are used quite a bit.
    I am confused for words like wind, air, injury...what could be the better replacement..

    Thanks in advanced
    Gauri
    Wind - A natural force that moves the air around you.
    Air - What you breath.
    Breath - What you exhale - you breath in and breath out. What comes out is called your breath.

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    Default Re: Children's talk

    Thanks a lot Gill for the explaining about wind, air and breath.

    Regards
    Gauri

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