World Cup

[for learning]

Hello!
I have written a text and I would like to know if it is grammatically correct. It is as follows:

"From my town they arrived to play at this famous event.

The way they played before had raised our hopes.

These players wanted to get the maximun price at the end.

We all who love this game saw them perform well.

With congratulations and cheerings they were received and

lifting the golden cup will they be remembered."

It is about soccer World Cup. Thank you very much in advance. I would appreciate any suggestion.

Regards.

[Gillnetter]

Hello!
I have written a some text and I would like to know if it is grammatically correct. It is as follows:

"From my town they arrived to play at this famous event.

The way they played before had raised our hopes.

These players wanted to get the maximum price at the end.

We all, who love this game, saw them perform well.
All who love this game saw them perform well.
(This means that only those who love the game saw them perform well. I assume that those who do not love the game did not see them perform well.)
With congratulations and cheerings they were received and

lifting the golden cup will they be remembered."
They were received with congratulations and cheering. They will be remembered lifting the golden cup.

It is about soccer World Cup. Thank you very much in advance. I would appreciate any suggestion.

Regards.

Gil