Could you please proofread this short paragraph? Thank you!

[ARUK2008]

"To help the students of this group overcome their pronunciation problems I have chosen an activity that I believe will be useful for them. This activity belongs to the book xxxxxx, page xx, Unit 3, exercise 2. In this exercise students will have to write the three –ed forms in the correct columns in the table and then listen to the answers. I would do controlled practice of word drills. By the end of this task, students should be better able to pronounce the –ed form accurately, without adding an extra vowel sound to the word. "

[Gillnetter]

"To help the students of this group overcome their pronunciation problems, I have chosen an activity that I believe will be useful for them. This activity belongs to is in the book, xxxxxx, page xx, Unit 3, Exercise 2. In this exercise, students will have to write the three "ed" forms in the correct columns, in the table, and then listen to the answers. I would will do a controlled practice of word drills. By the end of this task, students should be better able to pronounce the "ed" form accurately, without adding an extra vowel sound to the word. " I'm unsure of what relationship there is between the "correct columns" and the "table". This sentence should be rewritten.

Gil